I especially love the way you wrote Felix's relationship with his family. It's so warm and relatable. HIs dad is fantastic. "Good! I can just immediately throw you in the shower then!" made me laugh so hard. I was just a bit sorry that he jumped to school so quickly. I would have been glad to spend more time with Felix's family over the whole drive to his college.
This VN is quite nice, I like it. It has good artstyle and interaction between the main protagonist. It doesn't much typos and weird sentences compared to other newly made VN's before.
If I could ask, how much is the next update finished? I'll be sure to make more feedbacks in the future.
Thanks! I'd say around 15% is finished. Exam weeks just finished and I'm trying to make time in between assignments. But it'll probably be finished by either end of October or early November (Again, thanks for reading!)
This VN has quite the good potential! I really like the story so far and the interactions between the characters, It feels very alive, it does have some typos and unnatural sentences, but overall it looks really promising despite being a new Vn. Plus the artstyle is nice aswell. Hoping to see this VN grow!
I'm most definitely going for Thomas's route considering he peaked my interest the most! (although he's the only one out of the 4 dateable characters shown.)
The writing is really good especially considering it's fairly new. Wishing the best for this! Don't forget to take breaks every once in a while kay?
(Shit, I think I fell in love with Thomas already.)
Thanks! I didn't actually thought the vn would do this well I'm working on part 2 of the prologue and a few touches on previous dialogue (Rereading some of the dialogue made me cringe). Exams are coming close to an end so production rate will probably speed up then.
Oh that's great! Hope you'll pass your exams! I'll be checking the update when it drops and I'll give some feedback.
(You most definitely have KYAHAHAHAH, I mean who wouldn't love such a dorky guy? I already want him just from his personality, Hoping to see him more!)
Oh! By the way if I may ask, How long will the game have? Like, how many days and etc? And will it have some sort of timeskip to accommodate the dating part so they'll have their feelings thought about to the main protag?
The game goes off a chapter system, so it wouldn't technically be based off days. There will be timeskips (Not everyday is an exciting day). My main idea is to have around 4-5 chapters per route (Not including prologue and chapter 1)
I remember seeing your post on Reddit, and I mentioned that I loved the artstyle, and that I was going to give it a go. Well, I've played through it now, and I got to say that it looks very promising. Like sure, there's a few typos and a few unnatural sentences here and there, but overall, it's very good. It's kinda hard to say much about the story yet, of course, since it's so early on, but the characters seem interesting; definitely looking forward to seeing more!
Np, and I think that sounds like a good plan since the typos don't detract from the experience. Besides, you can always go back at some other point in time and fix them.
Just play it through and i gotta say it's really good. The art is really cute, especially Thomas UwU. So add to my collection~, this looks very promising, i'll looking for update in future :3
Just read through the test build. i really like it. The characters and their interactions so far are really cute and funny. I hope you will continue with the VN :-D
Alright, I finally got around to playing it and I can definitely say I like it so far! Very cute art, not too many typos compared to other new VNs and an interesting premise, I'll 100% be keeping an eye out for the next updates ;)
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I especially love the way you wrote Felix's relationship with his family. It's so warm and relatable. HIs dad is fantastic. "Good! I can just immediately throw you in the shower then!" made me laugh so hard. I was just a bit sorry that he jumped to school so quickly. I would have been glad to spend more time with Felix's family over the whole drive to his college.
that was the original plan, but it felt too long so I scrapped it.
Down worry, they still appear later on in the story via text and video calls. I made sprites for a reason. ;p
ive wasted days of my life killing time just waiting for this, its just too underrated too the point its so good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11
Why not update Android😭
My stupid ass can't figure out if Felix is a cat or a fox smh 😭😭
He's a red fox, Hope and Thomas are cats. I tend to make cats not have snouts compared to other animals.
Thanks for Answering! Also I love your artstyle sm
So good and the character is very cute
MPOOOOOOOOOoORRRRRREEEEEEE
It's so good I need more 😭😭😭😭
very good novel, notify me when the game is fully completed please:)
got bored, read this during class, and god damn, im hooked
uh, it's not that bad, it's good work, I can't wait to see what happens next^^
This VN is quite nice, I like it. It has good artstyle and interaction between the main protagonist. It doesn't much typos and weird sentences compared to other newly made VN's before.
If I could ask, how much is the next update finished? I'll be sure to make more feedbacks in the future.
Thanks! I'd say around 15% is finished. Exam weeks just finished and I'm trying to make time in between assignments. But it'll probably be finished by either end of October or early November (Again, thanks for reading!)
I see, well i'll be keeping an eye then.
This VN has quite the good potential! I really like the story so far and the interactions between the characters, It feels very alive, it does have some typos and unnatural sentences, but overall it looks really promising despite being a new Vn. Plus the artstyle is nice aswell. Hoping to see this VN grow!
I'm most definitely going for Thomas's route considering he peaked my interest the most! (although he's the only one out of the 4 dateable characters shown.)
The writing is really good especially considering it's fairly new. Wishing the best for this! Don't forget to take breaks every once in a while kay?
(Shit, I think I fell in love with Thomas already.)
Thanks! I didn't actually thought the vn would do this well
I'm working on part 2 of the prologue and a few touches on previous dialogue (Rereading some of the dialogue made me cringe). Exams are coming close to an end so production rate will probably speed up then.
(HELP I THINK I STARTED A THOMAS CULT)
Oh that's great! Hope you'll pass your exams! I'll be checking the update when it drops and I'll give some feedback.
(You most definitely have KYAHAHAHAH, I mean who wouldn't love such a dorky guy? I already want him just from his personality, Hoping to see him more!)
Oh! By the way if I may ask, How long will the game have? Like, how many days and etc? And will it have some sort of timeskip to accommodate the dating part so they'll have their feelings thought about to the main protag?
The game goes off a chapter system, so it wouldn't technically be based off days. There will be timeskips (Not everyday is an exciting day).
My main idea is to have around 4-5 chapters per route (Not including prologue and chapter 1)
Oooh, Okay thank you for informing me! I'll definitely will be keeping an eye on this VN.
I just want to say that Thomas looks a bit goofy on the banner, no offense.
Yeah, he looks a bit different there. I noticed.
I remember seeing your post on Reddit, and I mentioned that I loved the artstyle, and that I was going to give it a go. Well, I've played through it now, and I got to say that it looks very promising. Like sure, there's a few typos and a few unnatural sentences here and there, but overall, it's very good. It's kinda hard to say much about the story yet, of course, since it's so early on, but the characters seem interesting; definitely looking forward to seeing more!
PS. Fawn is just so cute omggg
Aww thanks! I was planning to reread some of the older dialogue but I'd probably focus more on the next update than a rewrite for now.
Np, and I think that sounds like a good plan since the typos don't detract from the experience. Besides, you can always go back at some other point in time and fix them.
seems interesting im gonna try it
I would love to play it but it doesn't support my on my device
Sorry to hear that, what device are you using?
Android
Hey, sorry it took so long. But the android version is up now if you're still willing to try it.
yay
yay(◍•ᴗ•◍)
Fun game so far and I like the art looking forward to updates :)
Just play it through and i gotta say it's really good. The art is really cute, especially Thomas UwU. So add to my collection~, this looks very promising, i'll looking for update in future :3
Just read through the test build. i really like it. The characters and their interactions so far are really cute and funny. I hope you will continue with the VN :-D
I'm glad you found them funny ToT
This was really promising. All the best going forward :)
Thanks! I'm actually working on the next build as we speak.
Just downloaded it and started playing it, seems like a good story so far. Also, I like the art style.
Thank you!! I'll try my best to keep up with the writing.
Art looks cool, adding it to my collection to try it :)
Awww thanks! Looks like my hard work is paying off.
Alright, I finally got around to playing it and I can definitely say I like it so far! Very cute art, not too many typos compared to other new VNs and an interesting premise, I'll 100% be keeping an eye out for the next updates ;)